mgn99

"there's enough users ... social network tool's " how about "there are" and "tools" proof read....

It's Vandenberg air force base. Also, what's going on with this sentence? "UC Santa Barbara Lucas Ransom, who is from Riverside County, and a friend were bodysurfing Friday morning before going to c...

"Sharks are often scene off"... should read "seen". Behrens, do you proof read?...

typo: Bogota, Colubmia...

"undocumented since at least six years" proofreading please....

Please give your articles at least a cursory proofread, this is riddled with errors. ...

It's Nichols Canyon, not Nicholas Canyon....

"A shooting suspect today barricaded himself in a residence, leading to a seven hour police standoff in Carson today." Was that today? Behrens, give proof reading a chance....

Sheep... a hunter's most dangerous prey. Joking aside, it sounds like they did a nice thing. ...

I think that a more perfect analogy would be someone criticizing the cupcake you just baked that has an ad stuck in the top and you (not being a professional baker) used salt instead of sugar. ...

harsh but fair....

I want to commend you on your really perfect use of quote marks in bullet #3!...

I appreciate bleak humor, but I don't think the term "oh snap" takes us into that territory. Plus the distance meant in the term you reference is time. ...

Yeah, suicide is hilarious. I'm sure his family and friends think so....

He attempted to murder 6 other Van Nuys babies?...